Started off well, with powerful poetic flow. Introduction of main characters held a lot of potential and felt empathy towards the, and this is when I realise that it had not gripped me sufficiently for me to recall the main characters name so I just refer to her as the woman with the baby and the mysterious woman in the red suit, that’s been meeting her husband. Is this infidelity or an innocent meet up. How is this character relevant to the story…read on people