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I can already tell that this is going to be a good book. The first 22 pages where filled with great writing and witty banter. I really liked the way the author sets up the scenes and characters I am already invested in there love story and have only read the first few pages. I read we where liars her other book and loved it, I already see parallels in the writing style that appealed me to her other books. The characters are relatable and funny when Adelaide was talking about her over protective mom I related so much and the line when she said "She
had already told her dad the little she thought he needed to know." I have felt this way before and can relate to it as well as when she talked about her night of the breakup and how she handled it was just like a real teenage girl.

I did find it somewhat confusing when there would be the first conversation but it didn't really happen. Maybe find a way to explain what was going on there because I had to reread those parts to understand.