Improved as I read it but I have a few qualms

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Ok so my impression of the first few pages was far from great.
I litterally thought oh god another romance novel about lovers separated by the divides of war.

It did not get off to the best of starts.

Then all of a sudden a time jump and I'm reading about espionage mission in Northern Europe and attempts to blow up a train. Immediately refocused me and drastically improved my opinion(nicely done)

What continues is a fast paced 17 pages of action and suspense as one of the two characters we're introduced to in the first few pages pulls off a daring sabotage in occupied territory before getting caught.



I was disappointed to have reached the end of this first impression and , whilst I have my slight doubts at the 2 very different story elements presented in the opening pages, this could be great if the tale continues with the emphasis's on the right elements of the snapshot presented here.