The title of the story itself has quite an entertaining, comical ambience about it. However, i would not use the bright, yellow design on the cover of the book because it makes it look more of a child-based reading book rather than one an adult can pick up and enjoy as well. Luckily, you don't judge a book by it's cover, the story itself was fascinating and enjoyable.
The description of the book in thr blurb was very captivating, from the first paragraph, I found myself to be quite engrossed with the story... It was definitely worth entering the competition for and now i have heard of it, i will definitely be making a note of the title and author and will bevkeeping an eye out for it online and in-store.
From the description alone, i would absolutely recommend this to a friend, and i look forward to researching further reads from the author.