Issssss thissssss inspiredddddddd byyyyyy snowwwwww whiteeeeeee? Can'ttttttt waitttttt tooooooo readddddd theeeeee wholeeeeee bookkkkkk!! Thissssss hadddddd aaaaaa goodddddddd plottttttt twistttttt Iiiiiii thinkkkkkkk. I hopeeeeee youuuuuu inspiredddddd moreeeee peopleeeee toooooo readdddd bookssssss and dddd writeeeeee a novelllllll, thisssss issss reallyyyyyy gooddddd! Buttttt I thinkkk you should spice up a little more I mean more plot twist but it depends on you if you did that, its just my opinion though. Although the prologue looks exciting but I think people will think like "did he/ she copy snow white" or so whatever. Well don't get me wrong, this is actually good. More detailllledddd storyyy or whattt. I hope this helpssssss but I really want to read your book though, just add a little bit spiceeeeeeeee