Interweaving stories
I liked this extract, the way in which the stories of three different (VERY different!) characters interconnect is done well, elements of the previous story obvious in each with becoming twee or clichéd.
The characters feel real, as do their stories, and the sense of place is subtly a however through the names of roads/points of interest that again create a very real setting.
The characters feel real, as do their stories, and the sense of place is subtly a however through the names of roads/points of interest that again create a very real setting.