I was a little lost at the beginning but things started making more sense a couple pages in. By the end of the first look the plot started picking up, and now I'm curious to know where it will go from here. Overall I like the suspense and mystery aspect of it. It's definitely not the genre I'm used to reading, but it kept me fairly interested in the last portion. The only thing I would change is making the beginning a little more interesting. I felt like all the details about the meeting and her travelling and being in the room with all the people talking about a complaint was a little unnecessary for the beginning of the book. I think the story has a lot of potential, it just needs to begin with something that catches the reader's attention a little quicker. Overall I'm interested and I like the tone of the writing/writing style. Excited to read more :))