I am unsure if this sounds good or not. The sample text was very short, with one introductory chapter each on Thea and Denise.
The opening prologue was very Thelma and Louise and I assume the similar sounding names is deliberate which makes me feel a bit cheated to start with.
The opening prologue was very Thelma and Louise and I assume the similar sounding names is deliberate which makes me feel a bit cheated to start with.