This first look immediately gripped me, especially with the vivid descriptions. The time switches were also well done, adding to the intrigue.
The dialogue between the characters was realistic, different to the normal "picture perfect" first meetings, and I'd like to read more to discover how this develops, and how the relationship ends so drastically
The dialogue between the characters was realistic, different to the normal "picture perfect" first meetings, and I'd like to read more to discover how this develops, and how the relationship ends so drastically