The letter at the start seems a it long winded but it adds a certain tone to the writing; some of the context gets lost in the length of it, however we get a clear impression of the godfather's character.
A more clear introduction of the characters and their roles would be beneficial. A lot is left to the readers guess.
The story sets out with an interesting premise.
The main character has an innocence and carefree nature that is likeable.
A more clear introduction of the characters and their roles would be beneficial. A lot is left to the readers guess.
The story sets out with an interesting premise.
The main character has an innocence and carefree nature that is likeable.