Great Suspense!

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From the first thirty pages, you already have a great overlook of characters, a great plot developing, tons of suspense and questions developing. I found the writing a little forceful which felt a little difficult in reading in an easy flow, but it's hard to judge from the first 30 pages. However, the story has grabbed me enough to push through this. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest and seeing how the characters and plot develop!