First things, the cover is just plain bad. This cover will only entice a certain reader (middle aged women) and will do nothing to attempt to gain new readers.
The plot seems overly religious and far fetched. Too romanticised, but the overly religious setting seems like it will just get in the way of the romance anyway. It sounds like it is a Mills & Boon trying to take itself way to seriously and covince the world it's not a Mills & Boon.
The plot seems overly religious and far fetched. Too romanticised, but the overly religious setting seems like it will just get in the way of the romance anyway. It sounds like it is a Mills & Boon trying to take itself way to seriously and covince the world it's not a Mills & Boon.