I really enjoyed the first few pages of this book.
However around page 9 /10 I lost myself and had to reread the previous few pages again. I think there are lots of new words / phrases / place name that come all at one go and it was a bit confusing.
Perhaps an illustration of the land at the start of the book will help readers understand place names etc?
However around page 9 /10 I lost myself and had to reread the previous few pages again. I think there are lots of new words / phrases / place name that come all at one go and it was a bit confusing.
Perhaps an illustration of the land at the start of the book will help readers understand place names etc?