I really like the format, the contrast between different outcomes, or worlds possible. I like how the layout breaks away from prose. I really like Adelaide as a character, she's well thought out and is very realistic. She's very easy to picture. At the moment Jack seems like an idea more than a person, he seems like what Adelaide wants her dream guy to be, so I'm interested to see how that relationship grows as we discover more about him.
Also dogs, I really like all of the dogs, and I hope we get to see more of them.
Also dogs, I really like all of the dogs, and I hope we get to see more of them.