Nice to see illustrations, which were appropriate, & ornaments.
Yara's name was used far too often, instead of 'she'.
She is said to have bought new kit!! As a youngster... Her mother did, as said later.
The teahcer would never have left new students to warm up without shoing them how - she does for a cool down..
Not a lot of thought, therefore, in the validity. Poor authorship.
Maybe children wouldn't notice.
Otherwise they'd no doubt enjoy the book.
Yara's name was used far too often, instead of 'she'.
She is said to have bought new kit!! As a youngster... Her mother did, as said later.
The teahcer would never have left new students to warm up without shoing them how - she does for a cool down..
Not a lot of thought, therefore, in the validity. Poor authorship.
Maybe children wouldn't notice.
Otherwise they'd no doubt enjoy the book.