Vivid first impression where the lead character and murder witness is a blind lady.
THe writing was superb and at times almost heartbreaking, I could hear Naomi as I read it, and the emotions and anxiety in her voice as she navigates a world that is closed to her.
The intro was already good just for being so well described and seemingly real,
Then all of a sudden the story morphs into a crime thriller with a blind star witness and a detective trying to piece together and locate a suspect no one has actually seen.
Great premise and a well written first look.
THe writing was superb and at times almost heartbreaking, I could hear Naomi as I read it, and the emotions and anxiety in her voice as she navigates a world that is closed to her.
The intro was already good just for being so well described and seemingly real,
Then all of a sudden the story morphs into a crime thriller with a blind star witness and a detective trying to piece together and locate a suspect no one has actually seen.
Great premise and a well written first look.