The first impression shows a well written piece that feels very authentic. The characters are believable and it's very easy to draw parallels in the girls relationship to experiences in my own school life.
I don't know if there is enough in the first impression to really get a sense of the story or how it will play out. I think it will be a slow burner story. The blurb makes its sound very intriguing and exciting, but so far the first impression read is really building a solid foundation for the characters and their background.
I don't know if there is enough in the first impression to really get a sense of the story or how it will play out. I think it will be a slow burner story. The blurb makes its sound very intriguing and exciting, but so far the first impression read is really building a solid foundation for the characters and their background.