Honestly, the first few sentences pulled me in, which I think is so important and the ending definitely left me wanting more as well.
I would say that I would have wanted more descriptions of the characters as I couldn’t quite picture them in my head, but I’m hoping that this will come in later chapters!
The fact that it’s a dual perspective is also a very big bonus as well, in my opinion.
I would say that I would have wanted more descriptions of the characters as I couldn’t quite picture them in my head, but I’m hoping that this will come in later chapters!
The fact that it’s a dual perspective is also a very big bonus as well, in my opinion.