I liked this he description and all the amazing words. I liked the way you included speech at the start instead of starting in the middle. Although I like the way you used the speech at the start, I didn’t like how you rushed into it. But that’s just me and I’m very fussy when I read these kind of views so I can sometimes be very very harsh. I hope you just realise that I am being quite nice to you this time so for now good bye.