Don't mess with the babysitter

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Well that was a whirlwind opener, didn't expect a twist so early, had assumed it was the wife we were experiencing the opener with, not the babysitter. Then the accidental elbow in the face that turned into more than anyone could possibly have imagined.

Exciting beginning and cliffhanger place to leave us. From the extract it isn't clear whether the man survived and it is the grown up child that is the subject being talked about or whether it is still the abusive man that was left bleeding to death by the end of the extract. And i'm intrigued how the title will come into play.