In my reviews I liked to say negative stuff. Thankfully, there is something negative for me to say. Firstly, I just all around don’t like this short story from your book. Secondly, I just found it extremely boring to read. I would of likes this book if it was more exciting but that’s just me because... well, I’m me. I’m just complicated when I read because I enjoy reading so much so I get very critical and I look for the things that just automatically stand out to my eye. I look for eye-catching extraordinary stories that blow my mind away. I’m really sorry I didn’t like your short story and I hope you can write another one but please make it a tiny bit more exciting so I will hopefully enjoy it. Thank you!