A bit on the fence about this one

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I feel like this could be a good story with intrigue and mystery but the writing hasn't really pulled me in. The 2 teenagers are really off putting in the first look excerpt. The secrecy between the husband and wife is irritating, I can't believe that he doesn't know why they don't speak anymore to the other family. I am interested in knowing what has happened to make the children stay young though, so perhaps the writing improves and draws you in long enough to find out.