She’s like a sister, but can you kill her

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Graphically the initial impression that I get wouldn’t capture my interest. The colours don’t jump out at me, maybe blood dripping / hands of friendship ripped apart or more vibrant colours would help. The sample does interest me and pull me in wanting to read more. The suspense, not knowing who you can trust sets up well for a mystery worthy of me reading