First off the first look was pretty boring. You get a glimpse into this character's life and it really isn't that interesting. I was hoping for something epic or a really hooking first sentence. I couldn't get past the first chapter. I'm sure that if I kept reading I would get more into it, but what makes the reader read the book is always the first chapter. Along with the chapter, the title page of the book looks pretty boring and when I look at it it doesn't exactly make me want to scour the shelves of a bookstore just to get my hands on this one book. Before publishing, I would say fix the title page and make the beginning chapter more interesting.