I liked it!

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The opening of the story already leaves you with so many unanswered questions.
The shopping scene is relatable, you can place yourself there and you feel the dread of knowing what is about happen as the author hints at it throughout. Marin is relatable, busy, normal. She reminds you how easy it can be to take your eye off the ball and the horrendous consequences of that.
I want to know what happens next!