Looks goos
This looks like a completely original premise, I havent seen anything even remotely similar to it before
I would love to see how this plays out how well it fits into a dystopian or fantasy genre and if it is w3ritten well to get enough of a feel for all 3element of the book
I would love to see how this plays out how well it fits into a dystopian or fantasy genre and if it is w3ritten well to get enough of a feel for all 3element of the book