Harder going than I anticipated

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Elegant prose that dances off the page. The first 30 pages promised an elegant follow up to Anton’s first novel, but I struggled a little with this second instalment.

The deco decoration at the start of each chapter sets the scene for the ball room and grand hotel where all the action occurs. I enjoyed reading about Raymond de Guise in his first outing and had been looking forward to this follow up, however this second novel felt somewhat rushed and I didn’t feel much for any of the characters this time around.

Set in the build up to war, I think the microcosm of the Buckingham hotel is a little too pronounced and more could have been done to establish a sense of the historical setting of this novel.

Raymond de Guise and Nancy’s relationship develops in what could have been a hug of a love story, but by the end I couldn’t muster any care for either of them.

I would have liked to know more about Helene, our of all the characters she seemed the most real, with an interesting past and a history of an interracial relationship during a time when this was still somewhat taboo.

There was so much more potential to explore in this book, perhaps there will be a third novel which will fill in the gaps and reflect more on the build up of war.