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I'm not sure about this one yet still intrigued. It's divided into chapters, but I wouldn't even necessarily consider there to be a break in thought to create the end of a chapter and commence a new one. It's like there's a new chapter whenever he is catching his breath between sentences. One thing bugging me is that the chapters that Jeff is speaking in flow really smoothly and quickly, but then we go back to our narrator summarising what Jeff is summarising to him and we lose the magic. I hope this doesn't happen too often in the rest of the book. It's the classic narrator telling us what Jeff said to him rather than letting Jeff talk for himself. Nonetheless, I want to know more of Jeff's story.