Bad Sentencing!

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Claudia did this. Claudia did that. Claudia looked at Rachel. Rachel talked about Poppy. Poppy would arrive later.

Tracey tried to read this extract. Tracey ended up skimming the extract. Tracey could not finish the extract.

The author (or at least editor) needs to add some variation to their sentence starters!

Both the cover and blurb look good. It’s a shame that the writing isn’t.