Really well written

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I really liked the way Rose's insomnia is described, it is something you can't really understand unless you have experienced it yourself but it really paints a picture of what it must be like. I was really willing her not to drive the car. There are a few lines like 'I saved the wrong one' and 'I don't deserve to be a mother' which were quite intriguing and it will be interesting to explore if there is a root cause to the insomnia or other insecurities.