Unfortunately I didn’t find that the 27 pages offered for the first read were enough to really convince me that this book is for me.
I’m not an author but I thought the version offered needs further editing. There was at least one obvious error in the text and some parts didn’t seem necessary to me such as describing somebodies eyes as like toffee then hazel brown in the same paragraph.
I need to read more to be convinced this is a good read.
I’m not an author but I thought the version offered needs further editing. There was at least one obvious error in the text and some parts didn’t seem necessary to me such as describing somebodies eyes as like toffee then hazel brown in the same paragraph.
I need to read more to be convinced this is a good read.