I quite enjoyed the unique POV writing of it being in second person for some of it. Nora is slightly obnoxious, but it all really reminds me of kids TV shows from the early 2000s.
Good, gripping, mystery to open on - the tension can be felt for sure! The kids also might be interesting to follow, but I most certainly want to know more about Nora!
The footnotes are a bit hard to read with the chosen font however, and having them interject into the main body of text is a bit jarring, but they do give decent additional context.
Good, gripping, mystery to open on - the tension can be felt for sure! The kids also might be interesting to follow, but I most certainly want to know more about Nora!
The footnotes are a bit hard to read with the chosen font however, and having them interject into the main body of text is a bit jarring, but they do give decent additional context.