I'm not sure

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The premise seems very interesting and something I would like to read about but the writing seems jarring for me. I don't feel that the characters were well introduced therefore I had problems following through the text, which made it unenjoyable to read. I could be wrong it might get better later on because it does seem interesting but I don't know if I can't stick out this writing style.