Great start!
This was a really short First Impression but still told a lot.
The prologue set in Italy made it seem, to me at least, that the drowned girl was a teenager, but then we find from Chapter 1 that she was only young.
The main story, about the holiday, hasn’t started yet so I’m excited to see how that develops.
The prologue set in Italy made it seem, to me at least, that the drowned girl was a teenager, but then we find from Chapter 1 that she was only young.
The main story, about the holiday, hasn’t started yet so I’m excited to see how that develops.