The plot sounds amazing. The fact that this will lead to 2 stories being brought into one (hopefully) makes us, the reader, want to see more. Where will this take them? Will they live happily ever after? Or will they fall apart faster than they fell in love (if they do fall in love, which I hope they do)..........................................
What would happen if one of them was to miss the train? Do they find out they work in the same place? On the same floor? ..................................................
Will they grow old together?
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The style of writing makes us (the reader) want to see more. Jdjcjdjfifjfjcixjdncixjsndkcosjndjcidjsmdlfpxisnendkocusnwndixisjrnifidjsndjxiskemfkxkksnddj- sorry I needed more characters and I can’t write and more than that
What would happen if one of them was to miss the train? Do they find out they work in the same place? On the same floor? ..................................................
Will they grow old together?
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The style of writing makes us (the reader) want to see more. Jdjcjdjfifjfjcixjdncixjsndkcosjndjcidjsmdlfpxisnendkocusnwndixisjrnifidjsndjxiskemfkxkksnddj- sorry I needed more characters and I can’t write and more than that