Interesting story idea

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The idea of this story and the cover are very appealing and i love the unique idea that emotions can cause such real problems. I am keen to find out what happens but despite some of the fun moments in this short extract, it did feel a little slow in parts and I'm not sure if the different characters have unique enough voices as they all seemed to be quite similar to each other. But a fascinating premise and as I said I'm keen to read more.