Sounds okay...
Thought this was really going to capture me going off the initial blurb, but afraid it didn't too much...
I'm guessing this could well get better though, so perhaps it's best to not judge on the first few pages. I just like being really drawn in though and not want to put it down.
I'm guessing this could well get better though, so perhaps it's best to not judge on the first few pages. I just like being really drawn in though and not want to put it down.