Instant chills down my spine
So this starts off absolutely chilling, the dark, the waiting figure, the sleeping woman and then the moment of impact! I really like the time hops and layout. It differentiates who is the focus of the chapter really well. Nice writing style and excellent scene setting, I could picture that cottage in my minds eye perfectly. Really intrigued to find out what on earth is going on!! Fab beginning. Dark, dangerous and delightful!