Not 100% sure whether I'm loving the theory behind this story or hating it. I feel drawn to read on. Find out if there is more of a back story later on. A cause perhaps. I get the impression that she was a bit of a party girl, or maybe just spent time with that sort of crowd. Is this a repercussion of her younger years? A freak medical thing? Created purposely by someone?
I feel confused as to how a full story can be written around this subject, yet at the same time I'm extremely curious about what is next!
I feel confused as to how a full story can be written around this subject, yet at the same time I'm extremely curious about what is next!