Didn't pull me in emotionally

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I'm not a fan of the cover hence why it's taken me so long to write this because I just wasn't impressed from the start. I think the story has a good premise and is probably pretty good but I found the style of writing left something to be desired and I didn't connect with Holly at all, I found that I didn't care at all about what happened to her, rather than emphasising I found myself criticising her flaws and dependency on social media. Character flaws are key to any character to make them more human and Holly is human, it's just to me she's an unlikable human.
I won't be reading any further at least if I do I probably won't be rooting for Holly.