I love it when it was like it was almost dark when Riley heard screams.they whipped across the fields, carried on the wind, towards the tree house where she was working on her latest invention Riley moved away from her bench to the window her skin turning cold. It was so describing I loved it.liek it was dark when Riley had heard screams that was so describing and I had to picture it and when I did picture it. It couldn't get out my head.youse done a good job I loved it .it was enjoyable and boss I actually havnt read anything like this before and I would love to read it all again bc it was so relaxing and yuu also had the wind outside my house go with the story. It was so realistic. And it went with the weather outside it was so interesting . I literally hot right into it Riley was a good name aswell and I loved the laughter rising over thunder. It was so realistic