Draws you in

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You don't get a much more intriguing first sentence than 'If you're reading this then I am no longer alive' do you? This opening builds suspense, and I like the changing points of views. I also like how you get the flashforward at the beginning, so you know what you're reading towards and how what everything is building up to.