It looks great, the first thing I noticed is that Kellen is both willing to and has killed a man which whilst is something that is bad is great for his character as it shows his development after his separation from Ferius and shows how the separation has changed him. Life also looks pretty ugly having him describe throwing up in an ally and slowly starving to death as he gives every thing he owns to look for a cure to the Shadowblack. Finally and this is the bit that made me want to cry, hes painting Discordances, like a real Argosi, honestly him finally understanding and becoming an Argosi in the last 3 books finally has a payoff also he no longer calls himself Kellen of house Ke in his internal monologue and actually thinks of himself as Kellen Argos which is incredibly heart warming.