Beautiful descriptions, just seems a bit slow!

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The cover of this is gorgeous, so that gets a thumbs up from me!
I thought the writing style was beautifully descriptive, although it didn't really give anything too major away in the first chapter with regards to plot details. If you hadn't read the synopsis, then I don't think you'd really guess that this would have a paranormal influence just from the first look.
I'm intrigued into how the story moves on from this chapter as nothing major seems to have happened!