This immediately draws me in. I'd love to know what's going on and who's going to be trouble (and who's going to get dead!) The tone is great and I feel like the characters will stand out from each other nicely, which doesn't always happen.
I love the bits of humour and the whole feel of the story. It seems like a really good read!
I love the bits of humour and the whole feel of the story. It seems like a really good read!