Brilliant opening. Really easy to read and flows well so can visualise what is going on. The characters are outlined perfectly so you can imagine what they are like.
Can really follow Cats train of thought and picture being there with her. I like how she doesnt want to give much away about herself but there are hits to who she really is as a person.
Can't wait to find out the outcome with how the two cases are related and how she makes the connection to her dad. How will her experiences effect her judgement in the case?
Hope it shows a bit of her relationship between her mum and siblings too, building on her character and showing how those relationships have influenced her choices.
Can really follow Cats train of thought and picture being there with her. I like how she doesnt want to give much away about herself but there are hits to who she really is as a person.
Can't wait to find out the outcome with how the two cases are related and how she makes the connection to her dad. How will her experiences effect her judgement in the case?
Hope it shows a bit of her relationship between her mum and siblings too, building on her character and showing how those relationships have influenced her choices.