Right off the bat, a lot of evocative and emotional language is used to paint a very clear picture of what is to come with this story.
The interaction between mother and daughter is so vividly beautiful and pure and such a contrast to the darkness and rage that comes with the fallout taking place in front of their eyes, and from the fire itself.
The to-and-fro of emotions and imagery is really compelling so far, and I would absolutely be interested in seeing just how the author sustains this throughout!
The interaction between mother and daughter is so vividly beautiful and pure and such a contrast to the darkness and rage that comes with the fallout taking place in front of their eyes, and from the fire itself.
The to-and-fro of emotions and imagery is really compelling so far, and I would absolutely be interested in seeing just how the author sustains this throughout!