Good ideas, just need fine tuning

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I love the cover of the book- I think it is enticing, and the blurb also enticed me to read it.
I think the ideas in the book are really good and very poignant in today's society where gaming and technology addiction are an increasingly relevant issue.
I found it difficult to follow the story line as it didn't 'flow' seamlessly. It seemed to jump from character to character and from different story lines. Also I noticed in some places there were a lack of speech marks where there should have been. Also at the very beginning of the book, I didn't understand which character was being spoken about as being referred to as 'she' made it ambiguous. Other than that, there's a lot of potential here and the characters are interesting.