The way this reads does not come across as a first novel and certainly sets the scene for a real good read.
Why is it important that "Bathsheba" should be moved by Iris-apart from the fact it may be seized by the Thai government,did Annabeth and the girls move out of the family home and who is going to be the first to inherit the money?
Why is it important that "Bathsheba" should be moved by Iris-apart from the fact it may be seized by the Thai government,did Annabeth and the girls move out of the family home and who is going to be the first to inherit the money?