There is a real tone of urgency and intrigue to this extract. The news that is delivered to the party is sinister and you as reader want to discover more.
The structure is also promising- the first 2 chapters are a year apart. We open in 2017, then shift to year later in 2018. Looking forward to discovering more!
The structure is also promising- the first 2 chapters are a year apart. We open in 2017, then shift to year later in 2018. Looking forward to discovering more!